托福写作语言进阶提高
Part 3 句子的优化练习
1. 定语从句的优化
1)
Jason Wu, who is a contemporary artist, created a painting named Going
Home, which made a blast in the art field.
2)
Information that is provided in the advertisements is usually overly
exaggerating.
3)
He is always occupied by his work, which makes it difficult for his family to
enjoy the time with him.
4)
The Internet, which is an efficient means to connect people from different
places, is widely used all over the world.
5)
Justin Bibber, who is a young celebrity with outstanding talents, exerts
negative influence on teenagers with his bad behavior.
6)
Interstellar, which is a successful science-‐fiction movie,
inspires audience’s enthusiasm about physics and astronomy.
7)
People who are used to obtaining information through printed newspaper
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may find it difficult to make use of the advanced technological devices to interact with information.
8)
The milk powder which contains poisonous matters reach thousands of
consumers through advertisement.
9)
The customers who are cheated by the inflated claims in the advertisement
will be less likely to fall in the trap again.
10)
The movie successfully portrays a brave hero in the WWII, which leaves a
deep impression on the audience.
11) The Internet allows everyone to freely express their opinion, which speaks
more directly to the current issues.
12) Reading books requires more deep thinking than watching TV, which makes
it possible for children to exercise their intelligence and imagination.
13）Environmental problems, which are the hottest issues nowadays, should be taken seriously in the near future.
14）Protecting our environment, which is the most important subject, should be learnt by everyone nowadays.
15）People who work on solving our environmental problems are always smart and have a long-‐term view.
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16）Students who know what to do to make our environment a better one are very clever.
17）People love money, which makes it so hard for them to focus on solving our
environmental problems because protecting our environment won’t benefit them in any ways, at least not for now.
18） We haven’t realized the severe of our environmental problems, which makes it almost impossible for us to really solve them.
19）Peking University, which is one of the best universities in China, strives to gain universal acclaim by investing more money on its research programs.
20）Professor Clark, who is a Nobel laureate, finds a way to cure AIDS.
21）This experiment, which is done by Professor Clark, shows a positive result.
22） He comes from a wealthy family, which allows him to study abroad with scholarship or not.
23） The school plans to build a new stadium on campus, which cheers all students up.
2. 状语从句的优化
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1）When we buy things, we always tend to ask for the suggestions form our family or friends, who provide us with reliable information.
2) Since people see how other people could become better off with the new product, they surely would like to purchase that particular product themselves.
3) Once people see the beautified pictures in the advertisements, they will naturally be willing to buy the products.
4) When children get addicted to watching TV, their academic performance will inevitably be affected.
5) Even though the domestic film industry spends millions of dollars making blockbusters, it still fails to attract young audience.
6) Because popular celebrities exert great influence on teenagers’ behaviors, they should avoid showing bad images in public.
7) Because nowadays TV programs are full of useless and violent information, they will harm students’ psychological development.
8）When we realize the importance of protecting our environment, we can actually solve our environmental problems.
9）When we finally stop throwing trash everywhere, we can talk about protecting our environment.
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10）Because we did realize the importance of protecting our environment, we solved a lot of our environmental problems.
11）Because we started educating our children about how to protect our environment, we made it easier for us to solve those problems.
12）When I walked along the street, I caught sight of a beauty.
13）When I saw from summit, the village seems to be gorgeous.
14）When I entered in college, I followed my parents’ intention and I majored in anthropology, for I did not realize what my preference indeed was.
15） When they yelled to me for almost forty minutes, consumer service sent someone to amend my broken television.
16）When he sees the right opportunity, he would grab it right away.
17）Once you fall in love with English, you would find it so easy to learn.
18）If I wear a Real Madrid jersey to school tomorrow, I would skip the class to watch the live game.
19）Because he is one of the top students in his class, he always is the apple of his teacher’s eye.
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20）Because it sells good in the Asian market, it starts to become a hit all over the world.
3.名词化练习(高级优化)
1） 因为人们的工作特别繁忙，所以他们很少有时间跟家庭成员呆在一起。
2） 因为人们现在有充分的食物可供选择，所以他们很少再会影响不良了。
3） 如果政府做出短视的决定，那么在长期看来我们的经济发展一定会缺乏增长动力。
4） 因为这个提议非常愚蠢，所以我感到非常生气。
5） 由于环境中太多的有毒化学物质，环境已经失去了自我修复的能力。
6） 因为人们完全不顾环境问题，我感到非常生气。
7） 由于我开了一家自己的公司，我感觉自己很有成就。
8） 我在微软公司每天都很忙碌，我感觉我快没有精力了。
9） 我做了许多不同的工作，在这之后我感觉我的自信心爆棚。
10） 因为她考试考得不好，她的心情非常沮丧。
11） 如果经济发展了，每个人都可以从中受益。
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12） 孩子沉溺于暴力电影，因此他们的学习成绩下降了。
13） 因为很多广告有着吸引人的效果和创意，因此它总是能成功地说服人们买他们不 需要的产品。
14） 由于媒体的监督，政府官员不敢再像以前一样受贿。
Part 3 句子的优化练习
1. 定语从句的优化
1） Jason Wu, a contemporary artist, created a painting named Going Home, which made a blast in the art field.
2） Information provided in the advertisements is usually overly exaggerating. 3） He is always occupied by his work, making it difficult for his family to enjoy
the time with him.
4） The Internet, an efficient means to connect people from different places, is
widely used all over the world.
5） Justin Bibber, a young celebrity with outstanding talents, exerts negative influence on teenagers with his bad behavior.
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6） Interstellar,
astronomy.
inspires
a
audience’s
successful enthusiasm
science-‐fiction movie,about
physics
and
7） People being used to obtain information through printed newspaper may
find it difficult to make use of the advanced technological devices to interact with information.
8） The milk power containing poisonous matters reach thousands of consumers through advertisement.
9） The customers cheated by the inflated claims in the advertisement will be less likely to fall in the trap again.
10） The movie successfully portrays a brave hero in the WWII, leaving a deep impression on the audience.
11） The internet allows everyone to freely express their opinion, speaking more directly to the current issues.
12） Reading books requires more deep thinking than watching TV, making it possible for children to exercise their intelligence and imagination.
13） Environmental problems, the hottest issues nowadays, should be taken seriously in the future.
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14） Protecting our environment, the most important subject, should be learnt by everyone nowadays.
15） People working on solving our environmental problems are always smart and have a long-‐term view.
16） Students knowing what to do to make our environment a better one are very clever.
17） People love money, making it so hard for them to focus on solving our
environmental problems because protecting our environment won’t benefit them in any ways, at least not for now.
18） We haven’t realized the severe of our environmental problems, making it
almost impossible for us to really solve them.
19） Peking University, one of the best universities in China, strives to gain universal acclaim by investing more money on its research programs.
20） Professor Clark, a Nobel laureate, finds a way to cure AIDS. 21）
This experiment, done by Professor Clark, shows a positive result.
22） He comes from a wealthy family, allowing him to study
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abroad with scholarship or not.
23） The school plans to build a new stadium on campus, cheering all students up.
2. 状语从句的优化
1) When buying things, we always tend to ask for the suggestions form our
family or friends, who provide us with reliable information.
2) Seeing how other people could become better off with the new product,
they surely would like to purchase that particular product themselves.
3) Once seeing the beautified pictures in the advertisement, people will
naturally be willing to buy the products.
4) Getting addicted to watching TV, children’s academic performance will
inevitably be affected.
5) Even though spending millions of dollars to make blockbusters, domestic
film industry still fails to attract young audience.
6) Exerting great influence on teenagers’ behaviors, popular celebrities
should avoid showing bad images in public.
7) Being full of useless and violent information, TV programs nowadays will
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harm students’ psychological development.
8) Realizing the importance of protecting our environment, we can actually
solve our environmental problems.
9) When stopping throwing trash everywhere, we can talk about protecting our
environment.
10)
Realizing the importance of protecting our environment, we solved a lot
of our environmental problems.
11)
Starting educating our children about how to protect our environment,
we made it easier for us to solve those problems.
12)
When walking along the street, I caught sight of a beauty.
13)
When seen from summit, the village seems to be gorgeous.
14)
When entering in college, I followed my parents’ intention and majored
in anthropology, for I did not realize what my preference indeed was.
15)
When yelling to me for almost forty minutes, consumer service sent
someone to amend my broken television.
16)
When seeing the right opportunity, he would grab it right away.
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17)
Once falling in love with English, you would find it so easy to learn.
18)
If wearing a Real Madrid jersey to school tomorrow, I would skip the
class to watch the live game.
19)
Being one of the top students in his class, he always is the apple of his
teacher’s eye.
20)
Selling good in the Asian market, it starts to become a hit all over the
world.
3. 名词化练习（高级优化）
1) The tight working schedule has deprived people of the time to stay with
their family.
2) The sufficient food supply reduces the possibility for people to get
malnutrition.
3) The short-‐sighted decision made by the government will
block the future economic development.
4) This stupid proposal sets me on fire.
5) For environment, poisonous matters deprive the ability to recover by itself.
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6) People’s reactions to our environmental issues piss me off.
7) The establishment of the company of my own brings me a great sense of
success.
8) Day after day, the busy work in the Microsoft Corporation consumed my
energy.
9) The experience of different jobs is able to boost my
self-‐confidence in the future career.
10)
Bad performance on her final exam upsets her.
11)
The development of the economy benefits everyone.
12)
Children’s addiction to violent movies leads to their poor/impaired
academic performance.
13)
Because of the intriguing effects and creativity of many advertisements，
people are always convinced to buy products they don’t need.
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